Friday, May 16, 2008

Episode 431

Read the comic here.

I wasn't sure if I wanted to cut back to Past!Whiskey in the fourth panel or not - but I realized that Donut's explosive going off would probably be heard/felt by the group as they're somewhere on the same floor - although way off by the elevators at this point. Having Wash dismiss the event keeps the continuity running smooth. And I know a few of you are watching me closely on that...

First draft of Panel Four Dialog:
Past!Whiskey: what was that?? The whole building shook! The zombies must be revolting!
Past!MarySue: We did that joke already.
Past!Wash: Or we were about to.

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Blogger Maarten said...


May 16, 2008 7:58 AM  
Blogger Geoffrey said...

I wonder if Donut's got any last-second tricks up his sleeve he wanted to pull off. Because if not, I can't see a way out of this for Whiskey and Scotch, either.

I think the cut back to Wash and Fox in the earlier episode looks like a rather big cop-out on Doyle's part. Indeed, back in Episode 241, the storyline shows no knowledge at all of the future Whiskey/Donut/Scotch's plans to get a piece of Pat.

I would've preferred to know something more of what Donut's fate was ... 'Tis not easy to get blown to smithereens and pull yourself together again ...

May 16, 2008 8:22 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

If this is a Doctor Who spoof, he'll just regenerate...

May 16, 2008 9:53 AM  
Anonymous Semi brick said...


May 16, 2008 10:33 AM  
Anonymous Jordan said...

dun dun dunnnnnnnnnnnn

May 16, 2008 11:59 AM  
Blogger Maarten said...

dun dun duuuuuuuuuun

May 17, 2008 8:14 AM  
Anonymous Gaby said...


May 18, 2008 1:35 PM  
Anonymous Samuel said...

Aren't they made of plastic?They can pull themselves back together again, duh.

May 18, 2008 3:42 PM  

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